Meeting the Goldfinch
This morning
cold and snowy
I braved the wind
to put out seeds
for the birds.
A small goldfinch
huddled on the rail.
of the deck
protected from the storm.
He did not move
when I spread out the seeds
but cocked his head
and gazed at me
as if to say ---
“I know what you are doing.”
He did not fly away
when I moved toward
the door
but cocked his head again
I stretched out
one finger
enraptured
stroked his silken head
before he flew
to the shelter
of the hemlock tree
oh the awe!
"I once had a sparrow alight upon my shoulder for a moment, while I was hoeing in a village garden, and I felt that I was more distinguished by that circumstance that I should have been by any epaulet I could have worn."
- Henry David Thoreau
cold and snowy
I braved the wind
to put out seeds
for the birds.
A small goldfinch
huddled on the rail.
of the deck
protected from the storm.
He did not move
when I spread out the seeds
but cocked his head
and gazed at me
as if to say ---
“I know what you are doing.”
He did not fly away
when I moved toward
the door
but cocked his head again
I stretched out
one finger
enraptured
stroked his silken head
before he flew
to the shelter
of the hemlock tree
oh the awe!
"I once had a sparrow alight upon my shoulder for a moment, while I was hoeing in a village garden, and I felt that I was more distinguished by that circumstance that I should have been by any epaulet I could have worn."
- Henry David Thoreau
21 Comments:
Your poem feels magical.
Wonderful poetry! And the goldfinch photos are lovely.
I loved reading your poem. I gasped when I read the last few lines and tears came to my eyes. What an amazing experience - such an honour to be trusted. You must have a deep peace within you. You've illustrated the poem beautifully with wonderful photos (or perhaps it's the other way around). Whichever way - this post is a delight.
Just love the bird, the poetry ... This is better than anything on TV!
What a perfect experience. Most of my visiting birds move away from the feeding area when I come outdoors. I loved seeing the Goldfinch you have. They differ from European goldfinches. Lovely capture of the moment in your poem. Thank you.
Thank you for sharing these wonderful photos and words. Very cool.
What an awesome moment. It is a real gift to be able to appreciate a moment like that, and then to describe it so well.
What a golden moment. How magnificent it must be to be so trusted. Beautiful.
I loved this... beautiful pic, beautiful poem. I have no words to express the experience that you have brought to us this morning.
beautiful photos and words...they look so perfect all puffed out to keep warm. Their spacing on the branches -- perfect. Lovely. thank you.
what a golden abundance of little birds. they seem to be watching and listening and learning who you are, while you are listening and writing and watching them. beautiful mix of poetry and photos.
Carolyn,
These lovely pictures and words are infused with the peace and beauty of your soul. Thank you for creating this precious space.
It is a joy to come to know you through your art, and your encouragement is a great solace to me. Thank you, always.
Wow, I love how you told this story via a poem. I love coming here and I think I know why that bird stayed for the connection - to feel serenity.
Nice goldfinch. Ours in Austin have mostly gone north by now.
A moment of magic. I was there with you ...
a sacred moment- moments like those are hard to put into words and you'll treasure it forever.
Your goldfinch pictures and poem are neat. It touches the heart.
That last photo is so sweet.
I didn't check my blog for awhile sorry.
harmonyinline
touching the little finch seemed like magic
nan
thank you
pam in tucson
thank you it is an honor beyond belief. The experience came first the photos after.
chiefbiscuit
I have never experienced anything quite so thrilling on TV
greenishlady
this is a unique experience. the birds usually move away when we come out - except perhaps the chickadees if we move very quietly.
maxly, deb and naturally nice
thanks for your comments. this experence simply wrote itself.
rexroth's daughter
golden is the right term. it is a treasured moment
cynthia e. bagley, taradharma, and sigrid jardin
thank you so much for your kind words and for sharing in this experience
tess
so glad you are back - thanks for coming by
kara
there is something about living in the woods that seems to generate serenity (most of the time :)
jim mcculloch
you are right jim... we have a large flock of goldfinches here right now - some residents have probably been joined by the Texas birds but I can't tell by their songs :)
mary
I am so glad
cindy
yes - a very special treasure
tim rice, laurahinnj and leazwell
thank you I am glad you visited and share the experience with me
Wow, I am in awe of your poetry and photographs. Both so inspirational and so beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing these moments in time.
a.
Oh! Oh, oh, oh! Amazing.
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