Haiku - Pathways
Arms stretching outward
searching for hidden pathways
that lead to my dream.
searching for hidden pathways
that lead to my dream.
For more wonderful Haiku and information on how to participate go to One Deep Breath
Endment: Small remnant, or end of a bolt of fabric
29 Comments:
"One deep breath" is what I took when I saw that illustration. And your lovely haiku to go with it. Beautiful!
What a breathtaking picture and your wonderful haiku matches it beautifully. Thank you!
Your Haiku is so lovely and the image is rich with the vibrancy of life. Simply wonderful!
Thank you for your kind comment on my site and the suggested reading from Higginson. I'm off to order a copy.
Beautiful blend of image and poem. Love the Haiku! Well done.
How utterly beautiful, both image and words. I'm still waiting to exhale.
wow, i keep going back to read this and look at the photograph, it's really quite great!
Wow-the image and your words gave me chills.
Thanks.
mb,star,paris parfait, jimmy and maxly
thank you for your encouraging comments. I found this a challenging assignment so I am very glad you like the results.
mikim
Haiku is fun but the guidelines for new Haiku are confusing. I first got the book from the library but have ended up using it a lot.
annieelf
you make me smile - thank you
lovegreendog
I really like the graphic and feel honored to have permission to use it!
what a gorgeous image and a wonderfully written haiku. Great entry once again!
What a lovely way to look at this week's theme. I scrolled down and enjoyed your "moon" haiku too, as well as the rest of your blog
Beautiful .. the pathways are hidden a lot of the time, but they are worth the difficulty in finding them.
a beautiful poem!
(i am also enjoying your wonderful photographs)
One deep breath it is, and a sigh of pure contentment, a pure golden image and a golden haiku to go with it!
jennifer, catherine and ian russell
thank you glad to have you drop by for a visit and always love the comments:)
mary
there are many times when I am not really certain I can find them but I keep looking
kerrdelune
thank you and thank you again for your encouragement
Awesome image! Lovely haiku to make it the perfect package :)
Lovely haiku & the pic matches it perfectly!
Wow, I love that. I so admire people who can write poetry and Haiku is the top of the line for me. The art illustrates it perfectly.
You make me want to write more haiku. This post is so lovely, endment.
Which leads to my dream
And my dance
A SOLSTICE dance...
Aqueous flow
Gravity free
Delight...
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thank you, 'endment'
i am speechless.. and you know that is hard to do... :-)
tammy and neasa
your comments and encouragement are greatly appreciated
rain and robin andrea
so I am waiting to see some haiku from you:)
chuck
glad you are enjoying this wonderful long June day :)
cynthia e. bagley
WOW - speachless??? :)
Such power in the picture - coupled with the restraint of the words - just beautiful.
Rebekah
Living Part Deux
Great to see your comment!!! welcome back!
Thank you, thank you. Simplicity, beauty.
Wow breathtaking post beautiful words beautiful picture.
you accomplished a great deal with a few words. a wonderful blend of picture and haiku
a glorious pairing of art and haiku
is it just me, or does this painting look like a book opening?
This is as it is suppose to be, one deep breath and renewing, what a song you have sung with your clarity.
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